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Postby MotherMercury » Fri Apr 27, 2012 12:03 pm

The magic circling the air upon his name,
At first listen my life started anew,
To sing us pure poetry was his game,
To bring us joy and happiness too,

10 years old when I first spoke of his name,
Though 3 and a half years later, so many memories I have made,
Buying my first record, buying my first cassette,
Have I discovered a more beautiful band?
Since Queen...not yet,

That man glimmering on centre stage,
Is like a father, like a god figure in my eyes,
The music of Queen, I could never turn the page,
Not even when I grow old and wise,

I'll recite Queen lyrics till the day I die,
I'll repeat "Lover of Life - Singer of Songs"
I'll spread my wings till I can no longer fly,
In our hearts is where dear Freddie Mercury belongs,

My candle burns in the darkness for him,
I raise my banner and stand up strong,
I'll speak out loud and speak out clearly,
"Oh, Lover of Life - Singer of Songs"
Mother Mercury,
Look what they've done to me,
I cannot run, I cannot hide...
 
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Re: Myself with Queen/Freddie Mercury in poetry

Postby BulgariaLovesQueen » Sun Apr 29, 2012 12:45 pm

I love it! Nice job! :) What do you think about this one I wrote.... It's a song actually,for Freddie :) Sorry if there are any mistakes.I have other songs for him if you wanna read them :)

-------I Miss You (The Legend Will Always Last)
A smiling face is watching me.
Somewhere up in the sky.
Every time it winks a star falls
And then it passes into the night.
I miss you.
I still miss you,my dear.
A white angel.A little bird.
Why did you fly away from this world?
And my heart hurts every time I think of you.
I miss you.
I still miss you.
If I could go back in time,
I would try to make you change your mind.
But now it’s too late.
You’ve already said goodbye.

And now I miss you more than ever.
You voice is spinning in my mind,
Singing ‘’Who wants to live forever?’’
Maybe you knew you were going to die.
You could’ve lived your life better
But you weren’t able to try.
Because days were passing by so fast.
But the legend will always last.

His heart,fighting with the destiny.
His soul,keeping his body strong.
After all these days I see
He was facing with the problems all alone.
He could’ve stopped believing a miracle would happen.
He could’ve stopper thinking a brighter day would come.
But he bravely kept fighting till the end.
Till the last day when he was gone.
If I could turn back the clock,
I would warn you for all these things.
But now Heaven’s you new home.
So,darling,spread you wings!

Now I miss you more than ever.
You voice is spinning in my mind,
Singing ‘’Who wants to live forever?’’
Maybe you knew you were going to die.
You could’ve lived your life better
But you weren’t able to try.
Because days were passing by so fast.
But the legend will always last.

I miss you like the sun in those cloudy days.
I miss you like the light in a dark place.
I know everything was ment to be.
But God could’ve given you more days to live.

Marie :)
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Re: Myself with Queen/Freddie Mercury in poetry

Postby MotherMercury » Sun Apr 29, 2012 11:01 pm

That was beautiful :'). It was great, I loved it! Thanks for sharing it :)
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Re: Myself with Queen/Freddie Mercury in poetry

Postby BulgariaLovesQueen » Mon Apr 30, 2012 8:25 am

MotherMercury wrote:That was beautiful :'). It was great, I loved it! Thanks for sharing it :)

Well,thank you! :) I'm gonna share this one as well...if you don't mind...

------We Still Love You------
We all cry when we remember that day.
Our memories will never fade away.
You left this world so young
But you’re still walking ...around.
Many people try to replace you
But they don’t have the passion and the soul.
They don’t feel the music like you do.
They never stand up again when they fall.

You’ll stay in our hearts forever.
Maybe we’ll never see you again.
But Freddie, you were Made in Heaven
And you’ll always Play the Game.
Maybe we’ll never hear your beautiful voice.
But we’ll always think about you.
Cause you helped us to believe that when we have no choice
We have to fight and we’ll pull through.
That’s why…we still love you.

We loved to hear the words “My dear”.
We loved to see that charming smile.
And the crowds were waving hands and we all cheered
when you were singing just for a while.
Maybe you were trying to say goodbye
When you were singing that The Show Must Go On.
We could see the light in your eyes.
You were passing by, you were almost gone.
But your smile was still staying on.

You’ll stay in our hearts forever.
Maybe we’ll never see you again.
But Freddie, you were Made in Heaven
And you’ll always Play the Game.
Maybe we’ll never hear your beautiful voice.
But we’ll always think about you.
Cause you helped us to believe that when we have no choice
We have to fight and we’ll pull through.
That’s why…we still love you.

Till the last sunny day
When the sun will fly away.
We’ll keep on waiting.
We’ll keep on praying For you…
Cause we still love you…

..and something I wrote for ''Mother Love''...and again,I'm sorry if there are some mistakes... :)

Mother Love
Mother love-two words that always make me cry.No,they’re not only two words.Mother Love is something special.It’s a feeling,a beautiful melody,a great masterpiece.It’s Queen’s last song.The last record,the last piece of music,the last time we hear Freddie’s magnificent voice.The last,but the most beautiful.The last,but the most outstanding.The last,but the most powerful.A distinctive memory in the history of music.
Every time I listen to Mother Love I feel Freddie’s spirit near me.I feel that his soul can’t find peace.I feel something…a bliss…a touch…a gentle tone.It’s like Freddie touches my heart in the most amazing way-with his voice.I feel his love.I feel his strong spirit.I feel his pain.The pain that was slowly destroying his body.Despite the pain,he kept fighting till the end.As he sings in The Show Must Go On- ‘’My make-up may be flaking but my smile still stays on.’’ He was slowly dying while he was working at the studio.He could barely walk but his strong soul never let him down.
Yes,Mother Love is something that nobody can explain with words.The first time when I listened to it,I felt like some kind of power is going through my body.I realized that Freddie just wanted a little peace while he was living the last days of his short life.He wanted to finish all the things he had started.Sadly,he didn’t finish Mother Love.But I feel pleased to hear Brian’s beautiful voice at the end of the song.Like always,he sings with his heart.You can feel the pain in his voice.The pain that’s breaking him apart.The pain, caused by Freddie’s death.
That pain…we’ll never get over it.We’ll never get on with the fact that Freddie isn’t here with us.But through the years we gave him the thing he was always searching for.We gave him our Mother Love.And now he rests in peace somewhere up in the sky.Somewhere in Heaven.
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Re: Myself with Queen/Freddie Mercury in poetry

Postby MotherMercury » Tue May 01, 2012 6:22 am

I loved them! What I love about them most was though is that I can relate to them, and I'm sure most Queen fans here can aswell. We all miss Freddie dearly, and I think we all felt that weird, powerful and moving feeling when listening to Mother Love. Thanks for sharing :D. I might write some more and post them as well :cool:
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Re: Myself with Queen/Freddie Mercury in poetry

Postby BulgariaLovesQueen » Tue May 01, 2012 6:57 am

MotherMercury wrote:I loved them! What I love about them most was though is that I can relate to them, and I'm sure most Queen fans here can aswell. We all miss Freddie dearly, and I think we all felt that weird, powerful and moving feeling when listening to Mother Love. Thanks for sharing :D. I might write some more and post them as well :cool:

Thank you for the kind words!I'm glad you liked them..... :) :oops:
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Re: Myself with Queen/Freddie Mercury in poetry

Postby BulgariaLovesQueen » Fri Jun 01, 2012 3:42 pm

Yep! I wrote something new,so I think you would love to read it! :)


We Miss You Freddie! ♥

Fighting with the problems of his life
Always living on his own
Having fun with the people he liked
Not many of them stood by his side

He didn't really care what will happen next
He was living for the moment
Always trying to do his best
Giving all his love and care till the end

We will never say goodbye to this beautiful man
Who was always making jokes that we loved to understand
''I'm just a singer with a song''-he used to say
But he's an unforgettable legend for all of us today

Fighting with the incurable disease
His body couldn't pull through
But he found the will to carry on
His soul never let him down till one day he was gone

The whole world was crying about this painful loss
Bitter tears were falling from our eyes
We never understood why God took him from us
We still keep dreaming about those sweet moments from the past

We remember the crowdy stadiums
We remember those sunny days
We remember his raising voice
The magic he brought to us still lives today!

We miss you,Freddie! ♥
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Re: Myself with Queen/Freddie Mercury in poetry

Postby MotherMercury » Mon Jun 04, 2012 2:19 am

that was really good! I loved it! He was really an amazing man wasn't he? So incredible strong and brave. We do miss him so. Everyday, I wonder what it would be like if he were still here...
I need to write some more... :oops:
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Re: Myself with Queen/Freddie Mercury in poetry

Postby BulgariaLovesQueen » Tue Jun 05, 2012 10:16 am

Awwww <3 Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it!
Yes,Freddie was an incredible man and he is still one of the legends in music history.
For me-the biggest legend! ;)
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Re: Myself with Queen/Freddie Mercury in poetry

Postby Queenfan02 » Sun Jun 10, 2012 5:17 pm

MotherMercury wrote:that was really good! I loved it! He was really an amazing man wasn't he? So incredible strong and brave. We do miss him so. Everyday, I wonder what it would be like if he were still here...
I need to write some more... :oops:

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I should think so :D
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Re: Myself with Queen/Freddie Mercury in poetry

Postby Queenfan02 » Sun Jun 10, 2012 5:18 pm

Queenfan02 wrote:
MotherMercury wrote:that was really good! I loved it! He was really an amazing man wasn't he? So incredible strong and brave. We do miss him so. Everyday, I wonder what it would be like if he were still here...
I need to write some more... :oops:


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